Strength: You understand how the materials work and you chose a mixture of materials to emphasize the two words - wonder and puzzled.
Things to improve: Choose the material texture wisely, experiment and find the textures suit your words better. Overall shape of the building needs to be improved. Can't really see "Puzzled" or "wonder" in your building at the moment. You can make the "wonder" building more interesting by manipulating the space, how do you make people start wondering when they walk into the building? The "puzzled" building could work better if you emphasize more on complexity. Just my personal opinion, let me know if you wanna discuss.
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回复删除You understand how the materials work and you chose a mixture of materials to emphasize the two words - wonder and puzzled.
Things to improve:
Choose the material texture wisely, experiment and find the textures suit your words better.
Overall shape of the building needs to be improved. Can't really see "Puzzled" or "wonder" in your building at the moment.
You can make the "wonder" building more interesting by manipulating the space, how do you make people start wondering when they walk into the building? The "puzzled" building could work better if you emphasize more on complexity. Just my personal opinion, let me know if you wanna discuss.